大家帮看这个翻译正确么?(英语)

发布网友 发布时间：2023-07-14 19:49

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热心网友 时间：2024-10-23 18:28

语法有点小问题,BECAUSE 前边是一定没有标点符号的,如果它用于句中.用于句首的话则要在分句加逗号.
另外photography 意指摄影术,照相术,建议改为Photographing.

热心网友 时间：2024-10-23 18:28

I like photography (不用加句号，如果要用句号后面就要写 that is because）because it could help me to remeber (remember) every exciting moument(moment) in my life forever. I like photography(不用加句号)（这里开始句子不通顺） because it told me a kind of life style: Everything in your life is beautiful, if not, change into another position.

建议你可以换成 ：I like photography because it teach me a philosophy, ‘everything in our life are beautiful, if it doesn't, change your point of view.'

热心网友 时间：2024-10-23 18:29

I like photography because it remembers me every exciting moment in my life. I like photography because it notices me a kind of life style that everthing in my life is beautiful; If it's not, I can change into another position.

从句的过去式全改成一般现在时，使用冒号有点奇怪。if引导的句子是个新句子没有主语，需要用;隔开。如果你那么用，就是语法的run-on错误，也可以改成 "...,and if not,..."

热心网友 时间：2024-10-23 18:29

it told me改成it tells me是不是好点。后面不要用冒号，用个--转折号？

最后一句，是什么意思，是不是换位的意思？if not, then find another view/change your view

写的挺好的

热心网友 时间：2024-10-23 18:30

是不是可以改成
because it could help me to keep the memory of every exciting moments in my life always fresh.

it told me a kind of life style,

是不是可以用 it teaches me a philosophy that everything in my life is beautiful, and it just depends on in which angle I am looking at it.