请高手帮我看看我的英文简历!!!

发布网友发布时间：2022-04-30 04:53

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热心网友时间：2023-10-14 08:22

从字面上看,你的简历似乎没有什么大问题,也谈不上有什么不妥.不过,既然是英文简历,我想你可能要面对的是一些外企,他们的格式或者说风格有一些要求.严格讲你这个只能称之为他们所说的Cover Letter.只能作为简历的一部分.
你应该再增加一些内容,比如Skills (比如电脑水平,英语水平,领导才能) Hobbies(比如足球可以反映你的团队精神,阅读可以反映你的知识面及思维方式和能力,旅游可以反映你的自立能力,勾通能力等等) Experiences(可能没有工作经历,但实习实践经历也足以反映你的专业实践基础)

热心网友时间：2023-10-14 08:23

Dear Sir/Madam:

My name is Wang manman. I graated from the Beijing Unit University this year .I am honored to have the opportunity to present my resume to you. (When I am going into the society, for exploiting my talents better, so I recommend myself to leads.)这个地方没看明白，中文是什么意思？
(I am a graate student that graated from Beijing Unit University.可以不要这句) My major is the Art Design (costume design direction), the main contents of professional study are the basics of painting, the composing of flat surface, color, stereoscopic and handicrafts, painting foundation, composing, beat plank, design of various clothing and various graphics software’s study. The professional study makes me get various technical abilities on clothing professional.
During my college life, I attended various activities of school and society. I have very well enough organization ability to adjust harmoniously. I am a career – minded man and I am full with sense of responsibility .I can work under great pressure.
I will give my resume to you with the letter. If there is an opportunity for me to talk personally with you, I will thank a lot.
帮你改了几个地方，你自己再看看吧，写的还可以。

热心网友时间：2023-10-14 08:23

写得不错
当我进入社会.为利用好我的天分.所以我推荐我自己给

热心网友时间：2023-10-14 08:24

最好一条一条列出来比较清楚
比如实习经历,学习经历等

热心网友时间：2023-10-14 08:25

还行吧！

热心网友时间：2023-10-14 08:22

热心网友时间：2023-10-14 08:23

写得不错
当我进入社会.为利用好我的天分.所以我推荐我自己给

热心网友时间：2023-10-14 08:24

最好一条一条列出来比较清楚
比如实习经历,学习经历等

热心网友时间：2023-10-14 08:25

还行吧！