大学英语六级作文,请高手帮我看一看……

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热心网友时间：2022-06-20 14:02

1.It become a more and more common phenomena that a man's job has nothing to do with his major nowadays.
2.It doesn't seem unacceptable that someone who major in english ecation works as a translation or a man major in physics plans to be a businessman.
3.it is confused us that the relationship between the major and the work改为It confuses us that the major's unassorting with the work.
4."I think there have two "because"(there are)(最好别用two because这种说法）
5. because the population of the colleage graates are raising every year（population能这么用？用 the number of)
6.it's more and more diffcult for them to find a good job(Finding a job is relatively hard ,not to say finding a job that pays well and at the same time connects with what you learn.)
7.no matter what is the job about(no matter what the job would be they would chase for that.)
8. the mayjor they study is not they real want(the major they sty is not the one they really expect.)
9.Just because they want to be a colleage student or they were just una*erted by the other department,they stay at the department they had.In that case ,they of couse have not interesting in it ,when they graate, they don't want to work with it. （They choose a college rather than a major,or they were rejected out of the doors of other departments,so they just have to choose a some certain field.
In that case they,of course,have no interest in what they learn.)
10. works工作不可数work,或practise.learn改用gain较好。
11.it is the same way like killing.....that.....
12.I can servring for others(serve)
13.The most important thing is that I can work happily

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热心网友时间：2022-06-20 14:03

第一,有些句子注意主语是和谓语不对应 it becomes more and more common that ....
第二,有些句子没有谓语, for example:one's major is english ecation,but his works is a translater 和one's major is physics,but he is going to be a bussnessman(单数形式).
第三,注意下单复数名词如,In my opinion
第四,情态动词后要用动词原型,如at the same time,I can serve for others.

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