一篇七年级英语简单的作文,看看有没有什么语法错误?

and the smell of fresh air makes me calm. I always walk with a slow pace, not because I dislike school, but because I want to stay closer to the nature. Listening to the sound of birds flying,

第一，语法错误 prefer to + sth/doing sth， 所以应该是 I prefer to joining in the English corner and watching English movies.参加活动，一般要加介词in，所以join in your activities for i will have less homework than that i have now.z这一句than前后结构一样，要用省略，所以改成for ...

My family I have a family.There are five people in my family.There are my mother,my father,my sister,my brother and I.My father is 39 years old.He is of medium build (build -->size)and medium height.He is a little strict (你想表达严肃呢,就strict -->serious; 你想表达...

In my opinion, to some extent,although phenomenons of throwing rubbish anywhere are inevitable,we can make a set of rules to punish people who throw rubbish at their will.To solve the problem,I'd like to put forward some suggestions.Firstly,we should recruit some volunteers to re...

人与人之间的交流变得有距离 这是你的字面意思 但是 between 后面是接 and 不是to，而且交流变得有距离不觉得很怪吗，are become 也错了 用 are becoming 或者 直接becomes 都行，距离distance不是形容词，the distance of communication becomes more huge(large\wide )，这样才是正确的用法。

先看看语法~Last week ,I saw a people wasting water in the restroom.people是复数，person才是单数。→Last week ,I saw a person wasting water in the restroom.I was very angry and I warn her not to do this next time.你前面用了过去式，可是忘了后面的哦~→I was very angry ...

story 是鬼故事，应该将鬼故事， 所以用 talked about）that’s UFO 不是 a UFO。we looked upward。said with a low voice near us： next to us 更好一些 got out： came out i'm afraid： i'm scared 是我很害怕的意思，不应用afraid widely open 语法 形容词 应该用woke up，要用过去...

1,I like he sings songs. 错误， I like listening to his songs. 2,working-hard 改成hard-working 3,when he was young(少了一个was) 4, He used to be...others改成He used to help others.5最后一句是问号。纯手打，请采纳！

“This Monday,we went to Changzhou” 英语习惯与中文不同，状语应该在后，所以应该改成“We went to Changzhou this monday”"We feel very happy" 改成 “we were very happy” 更加自然，符合一般习惯 很多不是语法问题，是英文的习惯，所以楼主可能需要多看一下原文书籍，熟悉一下就好啦。

句子间缺少过渡。而且有流水账的感觉,应该加点润色的词语。Today,Li Ming got up too late to go to school.So he ate breakfast much faster than before and then leave home in a hurry.He was so worried that he didnot comply with traffic tules.Something unexpected happened, a small ...