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热心网友 时间:2023-10-27 11:05
One day, it was sunny. Jim and Tom went to the No.1 park. While they were having fun playing in the park, they heard loud music around them. Some people were dancing with the music. The music was so loud that they couldn’t stand it. So the boys went to stop them. They told the dancers that the loud music made others uncomfortable. After hearing this, the dancer said sorry to the boys and turned down the music at once. All the other people spoke highly of the boys and the dancers. Jim and Tom went away happily. What good boys they are. We should learn from them. |
试题分析:本题是一篇看图作文。我们应首先做的就是仔细观察画面,了解图画内容,然后用正确的语句将这些内容表达出来。根据要求完整叙述故事内容可知,本文主要使用一般过去时态,主要是用第三人称。在书写时要注意时态与时间状语相一致、主语和谓语要一致。 【亮点说明】亮点一:The music was so loud that they couldn’t stand it. 音乐的声音太大了以致他们不能忍受。亮点二:All the other people spoke highly of the boys and the dancers. 所有其他的人都高度赞扬那些男孩和跳舞的人。 |