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热心网友 时间：2024-04-01 05:48

With the development of science and technology, there are more and more new procts appearing in human being's life. The cellphone is a good example.Nowadays cellphones have been widely used in people's daily life. It seems that people can't live without it. It is a must for all.

The cellphone is very convenient. It brings people closer. People can connect with anyone at any place if that person has cellphones. The cellphone offers much entertainment, which can bring lots of happiness to human beings and make their life more colorful. In general, the cellphone is the proct of high-tech, which brings lots of benefits to our human beings.

However, just as everything has two sides, the cellphone also has many disadvantages if we can not make good use of it. For example, it's right because cellphones can help people to contact at anytime that they reced the times people meet each other. And some people use it in public or at meetings and the rings may affect others. In addition, some students bring cellphones to class.They may spend most of their time sending messages or playing games. They may not keep their minds on their studies. It will affect their study.

In my opinion, I think owing a cellphone is not a bad thing. It depends on how we use it. We'd better contact face to face except that we call our good friends. For students, we should make full use of our time to study. Do not use cellphones to interrupt others in class. If in emergency, it is not a bad choice to use cellphones.

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