求修改英语小作文 要求(professional)

发布网友 发布时间：2024-10-22 07:26

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热心网友 时间：2024-11-09 04:08

Hello! I m Zhang hua.I welcome you to our Xin Hua senior school .And i know you have some difficulties(difficulty) in communicating with other students .Don*t be careful(nervous).I will help you !
The reason why you can*t talk(改为get along ) with classmates easily may be(加上that，因为引导表语从句的词不省略) you are unfamilar to (改为with)surroudiings.The style of study and life is different from(加上that in ) your hometown
In my view ,you should ask (加上your)teacher(改为teachers) for help .they must be glad to help you!And you can play an active part in activities。it can help you easilier(放在不定式后) to make more friends（加上easily）.
I will invite you to my birthday party .By the time I will introce some friends to you .they are all kind and outgoing. I think you will be happy.

热心网友 时间：2024-11-09 04:08

Zhang hua改为Zhang Hua Xin Hua senior school 改为 Xin Hua Senior School And i know 为And I know it can help you easilier to make more friends中it 改为 It easilier句子结尾 By the time 改为By the way they are all kind and outgoing. 中 they 开头字母大写。Don*t改为Don’t can*t改为can’t 结尾Zhang hua改为Zhang Hua