高分求一份英语作文,自己写可以追加分数!可以加以修改

发布网友 发布时间：2024-09-27 02:33

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热心网友 时间：2024-11-17 15:43

全手写的，翻译如下：
My Dream
Good morning，every teacher. Today my topic is "my dream".I remember that Mr Qiu has ever asked me what's my dream.My answer was"To earn the diploma and get a good job!"But when I met three persons,my teammates, then we had our band.
In that ephemeral time, we faced many different problems and setbacks .We enjoyed the happiness that music brings to us, we felt very happy when we did a rehearsal.Every beginning is difficult.Especially，the first time we stayed on the stage, we had to face the criticisms.So
far，we paid out a lot and never give up.Our dream is to be a super star in the school.We want to share our music with everyone.But the captain and the drummer had graduated，we can’t perform together. The rain day,our four stood at the roadside,and got wet in the rain.We hugged each other tightly and we didn't say any words.It's the sorrow the words can't explain. However,we will still try our best to achieve our dream and express our passion of music.

热心网友 时间：2024-11-17 15:39

你可以多看看英语例文,记一些优美的句子和短语,这样你用上一两个你的作文就会增色不少.
还要记一些重要语法.其实,语法正确,短语精炼不跑题,英语作文提分空间还是很大的.