这是篇英文自我介绍 麻烦大家改一下错误 谢谢了
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时间：2024-08-26 01:58
There is one man.
My name is Gyuha Jeon. I’m 26 years old. （修改了的地方）When I was stayed in my learning time in Physical Education.
I joined the (修改了）army. When I joined(修改了）
the army, I repaired tank, boiler and others.
My hobby is playing basketball so I learned
to basketball in middle school. And I learned to table tennis in elementary
school. Now, I played (修改了）the sports at sometimes.
I went to church since I was a child(修改了）. （加了一句）I like go to church.To me,I like some special church. （加了一句）The(特指）Church’s name is ‘Salvation army’.
Every year in winter, I served a campaign
to help unfortunate neighbors, called ‘Charity pot’. I shook bell and spoke to
people for unfortunate neighbors.
My family composed four. My father is
physical teacher and my (加了一个单词）mother from Korean，she is a (修改了） teacher. And my elder brother was(修改了） work to a (修改了）
company. Our hometown is Dae-Jeon. But my brother living in Se-oul and I was live(修改了）
in Su-won.
I am a passive person.(修改了）. But sometimes
change actively when what I like thing.
I like music，too. So I interested in (修改了） listening
to music and I like playing guitar and singing(修改了） a song.（一般的叙述文都用过去式表示即可。）
热心网友
时间：2024-08-26 01:58
There is one man.
My name is Gyuha Jeon. I’m 26 years old. （修改了的地方）When I was stayed in my learning time in Physical Education.
I joined the (修改了）army. When I joined(修改了）
the army, I repaired tank, boiler and others.
My hobby is playing basketball so I learned
to basketball in middle school. And I learned to table tennis in elementary
school. Now, I played (修改了）the sports at sometimes.
I went to church since I was a child(修改了）. （加了一句）I like go to church.To me,I like some special church. （加了一句）The(特指）Church’s name is ‘Salvation army’.
Every year in winter, I served a campaign
to help unfortunate neighbors, called ‘Charity pot’. I shook bell and spoke to
people for unfortunate neighbors.
My family composed four. My father is
physical teacher and my (加了一个单词）mother from Korean，she is a (修改了） teacher. And my elder brother was(修改了） work to a (修改了）
company. Our hometown is Dae-Jeon. But my brother living in Se-oul and I was live(修改了）
in Su-won.
I am a passive person.(修改了）. But sometimes
change actively when what I like thing.
I like music，too. So I interested in (修改了） listening
to music and I like playing guitar and singing(修改了） a song.（一般的叙述文都用过去式表示即可。）
