英语作文评价 题目《My concept of Happiness 》最好提出有哪些错误的地方
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时间:2024-02-08 23:06
我根据你写的意思改写了一下,你可以对照看看,我认为这样的表达会更贴切。
what does happiness mean? i think it is east to answer this question, because happiness all lies in the daily life and somethings you do everyday.
people always pursue happiness by doing things they lilke, for example, they work hard to earn more money, to get prerogative, or just by simply having their favorite food. however, i think happiness is more than all of these things. for example, friendship and knowledge can also bring us happiness. to be more specific, in my opinion, study hard and acquire more knowledge is one of the major way to persue happiness. because we can not only feel happy when learning new things, we can also get to know how to creat happiness in the process of learning.
what's more, sharing things with people around you or helping others are also important ways to feel happy. because when you do so, you can turn one person's happy into two, or even more.
in a word, we can get more positive energy and feel more happy by learning more, sharing more, and helping others more.