【高分+追】请各位帮我翻译这篇自荐信!!!
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发布时间:2022-05-21 00:03
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热心网友
时间:2023-10-31 12:01
首先,你第一个犯的错误就是那个Dear Boss。外国人是不说“亲爱的老板”的!应该用“Dear Whom This May Concern”,直译是“亲爱的与这个有关系的人”,虽然中文听的便扭,可是你要写的是地道的英文,而不是中国英文啊!
剩下的我也不多说了,因为自己比较懒,看了一下楼上别人的,觉得除了nancylne可能是自己写的,别的应该都是机器的。所以我在nancylne的基础上改吧(我中文不是很好,所以看你写的那么多中文字,说实话有点头晕~)
Dear Whom This May Concern,
Thank you for your precious time. Having been deeply impressed by the good image and the professional staff of your company, I am writing to you in the hope of joining this great team.
First of all, allow me to introce myself. My name is…, and I am studying in…university, majoring in Human Resources Management.
Through the years of ecation, I have formed a good character and an outgoing personality. Besides, I am highly responsible and well-disciplined. Being a self-starter, I am willing to find a position that calls for inter-personal communication.
I am pragmatic and have grasped many practical skills such as Microsoft Word, Excel and Powerpoint, as well as the fundamentals of Adobe Photoshop. I am also extremely capable in photography.
As for work experience, I have been a music teacher for a year in teaching drums (爵士鼓) and through which I was able to express myself in another form while improving my communication skills.
In addition, for 2 years I have worked as a part of the management team in the student union of my university, ties included the organization of student parties and large festival events. Thanks to this, I was exposed to team work and have ever since been an effective yet efficient team member.
In terms of hobbies, I am an avid lover of music and sports. I do well in table tennis and badminton. I was also fortunate enough to have had the chance to perform inside the Musikverein (维也纳金色大厅) in Vienna as a part of a symphony orchestra.
I hope that through this brief introction of myself, you are to better understand me, not just as a potential employee but also as a person with passion and responsibility. Which I believe will benefit greatly to the development and the future of your company.
If there are any questions, please feel free to contact me through email: 123@163.com or call xxxxxxxxx.
I hope to hear from you soon!
Yours Sincerely,
XX
Feb. 17, 2010
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好了,改好了。最后基本上都改过了(不信你对比一下),因为实在太中国化了。如果是给鬼佬看的话,绝对会有读起来不是很舒服的感觉。尤其是你最后的什么“蒸蒸日上”的,别嫌我烦啊,呵呵(不过我确实有一点),那个不需要说的。
因为他们在选择你的同时,你也在选择他们。所以是互相的。所以我就改成了“希望可以马上听到您的回复”。
P.S.维也纳金色大厅的英文名也给你搜索出来啦!
热心网友
时间:2023-10-31 12:01
First of all, your company a good image and the quality of staff attracted me to cast the personal statement. At the same time, I sincerely thank you for a busy public to browse the material, I am eager to get your understanding and support. Are pleased to introce you to myself. My name is XX, studied at the University of XX human resources professional.
I have always been subject to a good family, so I have a good accomplishment, as well as outward-looking character, so well-planned style of doing things, there is a strong sense of responsibility. Thus, in the eyes of others, I am easy to deal with people. So it is suitable for your company is going to require the exchange of positions with people. Because I am more focused on practice, and therefore the need for the life of the local practice have some learning. For example, in software, I would be very proficient in the use Word, Excel functions and the proction of the vast majority of PPT, there are PS foundation.
This experience taught me was how to get along harmoniously with others. I love sports and music, for the better at table tennis and badminton, has been involved in orchestra and in the artist's dream land - Vienna's Golden Hall been performed.
In addition, I am good at photography. The number of working experience, I did a year music teacher, teaching others to learn from bass drums. This is the abstract art of using language to describe them, exercise their ability to communicate with others. Has also served as a two-year college student management personnel, responsible for the supervision, such as New Year's Day party a class of large-scale activities.
Hope that through my personal statement to this can make you I have a more complete understanding, I would like to with great enthusiasm and sense of responsibility into your company's development building. Your choice is my hope, give me a chance also you a surprise. If the courtesy of her, please send 123@163.com or call xxxxxxxx. Finally, I sincerely wish your organization has developed, flourishing! Job one: XX 2010 Nian 2 Yue 17 Ri
热心网友
时间:2023-10-31 12:02
Dear Boss:
First of all, your company a good image and the quality of staff attracted me to cast the personal statement. At the same time, I sincerely thank you for a busy public to browse the material, I am eager to get your understanding and support.
Are pleased to introce you to myself. My name is XX, studied at the University of XX human resources professional.
I have always been subject to a good family, so I have a good accomplishment, as well as outward-looking character, so well-planned style of doing things, there is a strong sense of responsibility. Thus, in the eyes of others, I am easy to deal with people. So it is suitable for your company is going to require the exchange of positions with people.
Because I am more focused on practice, and therefore the need for the life of the local practice have some learning. For example, in software, I would be very proficient in the use Word, Excel functions and the proction of the vast majority of PPT, there are PS foundation. In addition, I am good at photography.
The number of working experience, I did a year music teacher, teaching others to learn from bass drums. This is the abstract art of using language to describe them, exercise their ability to communicate with others.
Has also served as a two-year college student management personnel, responsible for the supervision, such as New Year's Day party a class of large-scale activities. This experience taught me was how to get along harmoniously with others.
I love sports and music, for the better at table tennis and badminton, has been involved in orchestras and in the artist's dream land - Vienna's Golden Hall been performed.
Hope that through my personal statement to this can make you I have a more comprehensive understanding of, I am willing with great enthusiasm and sense of responsibility into your company's development building. Your choice is my hope, give me a chance also you a surprise.
If the courtesy of her, please send 123@163.com or call xxxxxxxx.
Finally, I sincerely wish your organization has developed, flourishing!
Job one: XX
February 17, 2010
热心网友
时间:2023-10-31 12:02
Feb.17, 2010
Dear Boss,
Thanks for your precious time. Having been deeply impressed by the good image and the professional staff of your company, I am writing to you in the hope of joining the great team.
First of all, allow me to introce myself.
My name is…, and I am studying in…university, majoring in Human Resource.
Through years of ecation, I have formed good characters and outgoing personality. Besides, I am highly responsible and well-disciplined. Being a self-starter , I am willing to find a position that calls for inter personal communication.
I am pragmatic and have grasped many practical skills like computer operation and photography.
As for working experience, I have been a music teacher for one year teaching jazz through which I can express myself in another form and better my communication skills as well.
In addition, I have been administrator in the student union for two years in my university, in charge of organising public activities like evening parties. And ring my two-year work, I have learnt how to get on well with each other.
In terms of hobbies, I am a great lover of music and sports. I do well in pingpong and badminton. And I have performed in the Golden Grand Hall of Vienna as one member of a symphony.
At last, I hope that through this brief self-recommendation you would have a better understanding of me. I am eager to join you and do contribution to your company. If accepted, I would do my best and never let you down.
Please feel free to contact me at 123@163.com or …….
Wish your company prosperous and a promising future!
Your sincerely,
…….
热心网友
时间:2023-10-31 12:03
First of all, your company good image quality with its staff to attract I vote that we introce ourselves. At the same time, I sincerely thank you in a busy public viewing this material, I'm eager to hear from you.
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Finally, I sincerely wish you career developed, becomes more and more!