高中英语小作文批改二?
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发布时间：2023-09-05 07:04
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时间：2024-12-02 07:10
然后下面既然是lecture，上面也就改成lecture.第二段的第二句:Several knowledgeable doctors who are specialized in ...will come.famous是用在明星上的，而且要交代他(她)们会来。接下来一句改成:They will teach us how to maintain health at that moment.接下来:没有not only....but..只有not...but..,所以改成They will not only guide us but also provide free counselling for fortunate people.不要一直用I think..用I believe you will have a good time.最后改成Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
