【有加分】写给丹尼尔(哈利波特)的信,找人改下
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发布时间：2022-04-25 16:01
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热心网友
时间：2023-10-15 15:07
My name is Vivian, I come from China. This is my second letter to you. I am very happy, but also a little nervous. Let us pray that my letter will reach your hands .
Dan, for so many years,the feelings of love to you have not changed I am still glad to read the novel "Harry Potter"and this series of film. Because of the love to your heart, I like learning English,and that why my score in English test increases step by step .
“Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows”（ Part One）will be released soon, and I am looking forward for it very much, as well imagining your outstanding performance in the film.
China is a very beautiful country, there are many ancient buildings, beautiful scenery there. You will be welcomed if you comes to china 。if you please，came to my hometown in Yunnan, there are lots of wild animals. It will be my pleasure to be your guide.
Finally, I wish your new film has a I wish this film to have a good box office and your skill to improve
XOXO
yours Vivian
大概改好了，可能还有小语错。
热心网友
时间：2023-10-15 15:07
My name is Vivian, I am from China. This is the second time to write to you. I am very happy, but also a little nervous. Let us pray, God willing, this letter reaches your hands .
Dan, for so many years, My crazy love for your has not changed. I still love to watch "Harry Potter" book and this series of films. Because of the love for your films, I love to learn English, performance leaps and bounds.
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part One released soon, and I look forward to it very much. I always imagine your outstanding performance in the new film, that you're busy with.
China is a very beautiful country, there are many ancient buildings and beautiful scenery. You are welcome to come in China.Came to my hometown in Yunnan, and you will see lots of beautiful wild animals there. I'd love to be your guide.
Finally, I wish a high box office of your new film has,and a better future career.
XOXO
yours Vivian
希望符合你的要求。
热心网友
时间：2023-10-15 15:08
My name is Vivian, I am from China. This is the second time to write to you. I am very happy, but also a little nervous. Let us pray, God willing, this letter reaches your hands .
Dan, so many years, the feeling that I love you have not changed,I still love to read "Harry Potter" book, and watch this series of films. Because the heart I love you, I love to learn English, performance leaps and bounds.
Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Part One released soon, and I look forward very much, imagine what your outstanding performance in the film. That you're busy with film publicity it.
China is a very beautiful country, there are many ancient buildings, beautiful scenery. We welcome you to come to China, came to my hometown in Yunnan, there are lots of wild animals. I can be your guide.
Finally, I wish your new film has a high box office, future career is getting better and better.
XOXO
your Vivian
