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时间:2023-10-12 01:04
第二行 I think he was a hero.改为 I think he is a hero.
第三行 nobody to help her.改为 nobody wants to help her.
第四行 someone think the person helps the old lady because he or she makes the old lady fall.改为 someone think the person who helps the old lady makes the old lady fall.
第五行 Then,the old lady's relatives will ask the person who helps the old lady some money.改为 Then,the old lady's relatives will ask the person who helps the old lady for some money.
第七行 she can't tell others something 改为 she can't tell others anything
个人认为有些地方衔接不够好,我这里只改你语法错误,自己再看看吧.打得这么辛苦,多给点分吧.