大家帮我看看我写的英语作文有没有语病!!我是小学五年级学生!
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热心网友
时间:2024-10-24 03:29
保证是对的,我初一,新概念英语2!
The lamp is on the white desk。I always do my homework in the desk.my cupboardarepurple and white . 1[It’s ]my favourite 2[color] .3[ It’s ] very dreamily 4[color ]. The bed is 5[near ] the computer.the 6[ bookcases ]is next to the bed.There are some books 7[on ]the bookcases.
This is my room.I like my room.8[ and ]you?
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热心网友
时间:2024-10-24 03:30
And you
It’s my favourite color.It’s very dreamily color 改 They are my favourite color.They are very dreamily color
and you?改 how about you?
The lamp is on the white desk。I always do my homework on the desk.my cupboard is purple and white .It’s my favourite color.It’s a very dreamily color. The bed is near the computer.the bookcases is next to the bed.There are some books on the bookcase.
This is my room.I like my room. Do you like my room?
把上面的照抄一遍,然后就没有了
热心网友
时间:2024-10-24 03:30
I always do my homework in the desk.
in 改成 on
My cupboard are purple and white .
are 改成 is
It’s very dreamily color.
dreamily 改成 dream
The bookcases is next to the bed.
is 改成 are
就这样
热心网友
时间:2024-10-24 03:31
Open the door,you can see my room.“It is” very beautiful and clean!
The lamp is on the white desk。I always do my homework “on” the desk.my cupboard is purple and white .It’s my favourite color.It’s very dreamily color. The bed is near the computer.the “bookcase” is next to the bed.There are some books on the “bookcase”.
This is my room.I like my room.“Hou about you”?
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热心网友
时间:2024-10-24 03:32
有一些语病。。。
改好的文章在下面:
The lamp is on the white desk。I always do my homework on the desk.my cupboard is purple and white .It’s my favourite color.It’s a very dreamily color. The bed is near the computer.the bookcases is next to the bed.There are some books on the bookcase.
This is my room.I like my room. Do you like my room?(或者How about you?)
热心网友
时间:2024-10-24 03:32
1.clean and beautiful
2.on the desk
3.my cupboard is purple
4.the bookcase is next to the bed
5.on the bookcase