哪位大神帮我改一下英语作文,跪谢啊。。。
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时间：2022-06-28 10:11
There are two charts. From the first chart, clearly from the table, the students at the university of California vote their favorite fast food restaurant in Los Angeles. Five guys is the most popular way to select students, its proportion is 7.2%. Five guys can offer free peanuts and fresh meat, so it can attract the largest number of customers. The second is the most popular fast food restaurants accounted for 5.9, because they have great quality. In addition, in this questionnaire, there is no big difference proportion chick fil a paring knife and a loaf of bread (the former is 4.1%, 4.0%). At the same time, there are more and more of 2.7%, compared with 1.0% of the panda express. In addition, the percentage of taco bell, acoustic and Wendy's are the same, it accounted for 0.4%. Surprisingly, the proportion of Arby's is more than twice the percentage of McDonald's, ration is 0.6% to 0.3%. Finally, the proportion of the subway and burger king is the lowest, it accounted for 0.1%. Most of the students think that burger king and subway species lack; As a result, they don't want to go there.翻译出来是不是：有两个图表。从第一个图,从图中很明显,加州大学的学生投票他们最喜爱的快餐服务餐厅在洛杉矶的。五个家伙是最受欢迎的方式选择的学生,其比例是7.2%。五个家伙可以提供免费花生和新鲜的肉,所以它可以吸引最大数量的客户。第二个最受欢迎的是快餐店占5.9,因为他们有伟大的质量。此外,在此问卷,没有大不了的差别比例的小鸡费尔一和削皮刀一个面包(前者为4.1%,后者为4.0%)。与此同时,有更多的多,达到2.7%,相比之下,1.0%的熊猫快餐。此外,塔可钟的百分比,声波和温迪的是相同的,它占0.4%。令人惊讶的是,这个比例的Arby是超过两倍的比例的麦当劳,定量是0.6%到0.3%。最后,该比例的地铁和汉堡王是最低的,它占0.1%。大多数学生认为地铁和汉堡王的菜肴品种缺乏;因此,他们不想去那里。
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时间：2022-06-28 10:11
chart前有two，所以用charts
student由后面是vote，所以前面一定是复数，用students
it can attract the largest number of customers.
由意思知道是能吸引大量的人，the number of是。。。。。的数量，而a number of 是指大量的，所以用啊a largest number of customers
make up 有组成之意，但没有take up（占据）好并且前面是it ,所以要用单三形式即takes
think 后面是宾语从句，但这个句子不全，有Subway and Burger King这个宾语，但后面没有了，可改为dishes of Subway and Burger King lack........
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时间：2022-06-28 10:12
有两个图表。从第一个图,从图中很明显,加州大学的学生投票他们最喜爱的快餐服务餐厅在洛杉矶的。五个家伙是最受欢迎的方式选择的学生,其比例是7.2%。五个家伙可以提供免费花生和新鲜的肉,所以它可以吸引最大数量的客户。第二个最受欢迎的是快餐店占5.9,因为他们有伟大的质量。此外,在这个问卷,没有
