帮我看看这句子是不是病句,

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热心网友时间：2024-09-30 08:58

有吧时态错误buy 改为bought .shoes应该说a pair of shoes 还有thank aunt没有这样的说法吧我认为扩充一下thanks,my aunt .
仅做参考，祝您愉快！

热心网友时间：2024-09-30 08:58

要是书面的话，这个句子完全不能用啊（不如说放到作文里）

我帮你改改吧。
Aunt,I have received the shoes (which) you bought for me.The shoes are very nice.With your efforts,I will study harder.

热心网友时间：2024-09-30 08:59

是病句，可以改为Aunt ,I received the shoes you buy for me.the shoes are very nice,thank you.
With aunt's efforts,I will study hard

热心网友时间：2024-09-30 08:59

Aunt, I have received the shoes you bought me. They're very nice. Thanks. I'll study harder with your help.

热心网友时间：2024-09-30 09:00

这个句子应该说是病句，可以这样写：
Aunt, I have received the shoes you bougut me ,and they are very nice . With your effort ,I will study hander.
希望对你有帮助呵

热心网友时间：2024-09-30 09:01

Aunt, I have received the shoes you bought for me . The shoes are very nice. thank you. With aunt's efforts, I will study harder.