英语作文:l'm ready

发布网友发布时间：2024-07-11 09:47

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热心网友时间：2024-07-11 11:29

I’m ready!

As far as I’m concerned, everyone needs help and it’s time to get ready to help others. I’m ready to give my helping hand to my desk-mate who is poor at math.
First, I will teach him the methods of solving math problems and help him with problems that he can’t work out. In addition, I will also encourage him whenever he loses his heart.
As the saying goes, you share rose and get fun. I wish everyone could give out his helping hand. I’m ready to give out mine, are you ready?

精彩亮点分析：
亮点一：开头以高分词组“as far as I’m concerned” 引出个人观点，并巧用强调句及从句，明确表达了自己准备好帮助他人的总论点。
亮点二：中间段落运用first, in addition等连接词，将具体帮助他人的步骤较清晰地呈现。
亮点三：结尾段落用谚语提升了帮助他人的立意。
亮点四：结尾句用设问句给读者留下思考空间，且起到点题作用，为整篇文章画龙点睛。

热心网友时间：2024-07-11 11:30

so the number is falling down all the time.