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Anne was a Jewish girl who lived in the Netherlands during World War II.
She had to hide away with her family, so that they wouldn’t be caught by the German Nazis. During that time she made her diary her best friend, to which she could tell her deepest feelings and thoughts. Not having been able to be outdoors for so long, Anne was crazy about everything to do with nature. One evening, she stayed awake till midnight on purpose in order to enjoy the moon with the risk of being exposeD．How she wished she could regain freedom and experience nature herself!
Unfortunately, they were caught by the Nazis eventually and Anne died in a concentration camp in 1945.

试题分析：本文是一篇给出汉语提示的提纲类作文。文章只给出了简单的汉语提示，这需要考生充分发挥自己的想象力，将文章内容流畅地表达出来。成文时应注意以下几点：1.文章内容要齐全；（1）为躲避纳粹追捕，与家人一起避难；（2）可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；（3）向往自由和大自然。
2.时态：一般过去时；3.人称：以第三人称；4.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5.恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。6.词数控制在100左右。
【亮点说明】使用了从句：She had to hide away with her family, so that they wouldn’t be caught by the German Nazis. During that time she made her diary her best friend, to which she could tell her deepest feelings and thoughts.使用非谓语动词：Not having been able to be outdoors for so long, Anne was crazy about everything to do with nature. One evening, she stayed awake till midnight on purpose in order to enjoy the moon with the risk of being exposed.