急需帮忙给两篇简单英语作文改错
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发布时间：2024-03-18 19:40
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时间：2024-06-12 04:03
修改：On Hallowmas, I would like to be dressed up as a black figure.
(dress 是及物动词，I是被装扮的对象，所以要改为被动语态；“东西”指的是生命物的外形，而不是无生命的thing)。
2. the thing about wanted a black person, but his body is dressed in black.
修改：The figure probably looks like a person， but it wears in blak all over.(为了避免重复，此处的“穿”换成 wear)。
3. Black T-shirt, black pants, black skirt, black hat.
4. He cast a face, other people can not see his face in this way, and walk in the evening will not be seen.
修改：In this way, it keeps itself from being easily seen when it is walking at night.
5. This thing had eyes, but his eyes are red, the night will be light. Terrible
修改：It has eyes but they are red, shining terribly at night.
6. His hands holding a sword, can kill with the
修改：It carries a sward in a hand, which can be used to kill anybody.
7. He walked no sound.
修改：There is no sound can be heard when it is walking.
8. He will not laugh
修改：It is unable to smile.
9. this is my Halloween characters. He was very horrible
修改：And this is the character on my Halloween.
10. I liked him very much
My sister and I were at home, when suddenly the light gone out into darkness. I did not know what was happening and I got terrified.
I was too scared to stand up. We sat in the sofa while waiting. I could see nothing. All at once, I heard a strange voice. We were up and walked to the bedroom. I saw a white shadow. I was terribly afraid, We cried loudly, shivering and getting pale over the faces. We were in the dark alone for a long time. I was alone is my greatest fear with darkness, because I could not see anything. I was about to cry out. Subsequently, it lighted up. It turned out that the power had only been shut then and the white figure had been my mother who was threatening us.
What a dreadful thing Mother had done! Why she chould do so.
I will not be afraid next time.
