英语短文,求修改,润色
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发布时间：2022-05-06 05:16
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热心网友
时间：2022-06-29 15:22
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In this my prize if I do not think that participation in important.Because are the most important thing. Focus on enjoying the process.
Hello everyone, I am pleased to take part in the scheme. Let me introce myself first. My first name is a positive xxx.I are boys. 6 years this has really improved. I have a lot of hobbies, such as play the piano, dance, cartoon.Of Of course, the learning and speaking English is one of them in order to enhance the capacity of too.in order ofspoken language and my confidence increased and better training and my verbal ability to negotiate.
热心网友
时间：2022-06-29 15:22
热心网友
时间：2022-06-29 15:23
It has been 6 years since I arrived in the world. I have many hobbies，such as playing piano, dancing, watching cartoon. Of course, learning and speaking English is one of my hobbies too. I came here because I want to improve my English and build up my confidence.
To me, getting the award would not be the most imporatnt part of the experience, but rather, the participation would be the most rewarding.
下面是改写版本。有些句子在英文意义不明所以我改版了一些口语
Hello，everybody，I am glad to take part in this program. First, Let me introce myself. My name is xxx.
I am an energetic boy. I am six years old. I have many hobbies，such as playing piano, dancing, and watching cartoon. Of course, learning and speaking English is one of my hobbies too. I came here because I want to improve my English and build up my confidence.
To me, getting the award would not be the most imporatnt part of the experience, but rather, the participation would be the most rewarding.
热心网友
时间：2022-06-29 15:23
Hello every body, it’s my honor to participate in this program.At first,let me introce myself,an active boy to you. My name is ***.It has been six years since I arrived in this world.My hobbies are in a wide range,such as playing piano ,dancing, ,cartoon and so on,I am extremely interested in learning and speaking English, of course. In order to inprove my oral English and the confidence someone should always have,I stand here,in the face of you all. Whether I win the award is out of my consideration.As a saying goes,participation is the most important.
热心网友
时间：2022-06-29 15:24
let me introce myself first.
my name is xxx, an active adorable boy.
It has been 6 years since I came to this world.(你只有6岁~~~orz)
I have many hobbies，such as playing piano,dancing and sketching cartoons.
Of course,learning and speaking English is one of my hobbies,too.
in order to improve the proficiency of my speaking English and to build up my confidence,I came here.
Even if I can get the award,I will not take it important.
Because participation is the most important for me.
