假如去年暑假,你和你父母一起去了杭州旅游,请你根据下面的提示,用英语...

发布网友发布时间：2024-01-09 00:36

共1个回答

热心网友时间：2024-03-03 23:38

I visited to Hangzhou with my parents last summer vacation. We had a great time there. Hangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in our country. And it is famous for the West Lake and went boating. We also were climbing the mountains. How beautiful the lake was and how happy we were! We visited many places of interest in Hangzhou. We won’t forget this visit forever. I love Hangzhou.
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己的一次旅游活动。本文做给材料比较详细，动笔前先根据材料确定时态，句式，词汇等主要内容。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和过去时态，人称应该是第一人称。写作中注意使用连接词，注意表达的多样化，做到语意连贯符合逻辑。
点评：在写书面表达是首先要注意的问题就是人称，不能混淆人称；其次，应注意动词的英语，根据不同的人称确定动词的形式；再次，句型应该符合英语的表达习惯；最后，用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。