A. 请以My Last Vacation为题,谈谈你上一次的旅行。B. 请以 My Best...

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My Best Friend and I
I have a best friend. Her name is Lucy. In some ways we look the same and in some ways we look different. We have some things in common.
　　We both have black eyes and black hair, although my hair is longer than hers. We are both outgoing. We are both funny. And we both like music.
But she is more beautiful than me. I think I’m smarter than her. My favorite subject is science, and her favorite subject is Chinese. However, we both enjoy going shopping.

试题分析：在写作前要选定标题，选择自己熟悉的主题。写作时注意句子的完整性和表达的准确性。句子之间要流畅，比如适当的使用连词加强句子间的逻辑。在细节方面，注意单词的大小写和标点符号的使用。
【亮点说明】这篇作文结构清晰，表达准确流畅，文中使用了很多有用的表达方式和句式，例如：in some ways 在一些方面；have things in common有相同的事情；enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事。另外文中用到了一些连词如but但是；and； however然而，等。