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发布时间：2023-05-25 09:42
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热心网友
时间：2024-12-05 01:28
Before I aboard the plane. I had an headache because of the hot temperature in Beijing. I felt dizzy and wanted to vomit. At that time I was so disappointed because that day was an important day for me. I didn't eat too much for lunch, although it was the last meal that I have eaten in China. However,I didn't know the real nightmare is on its way.
When i got on the plane, I started to become more anxious because i know it was going to be a ten-hour trip. my headache was not getting better so i decided to go to sleep. I closed my eyes for almost nine hours. Actually, i couldn't fell asleep because of the pain. It was like a little bug flying in your head.
Due to the headache, I missed the dinner. When the waitress came with that grossy food on that cart. i felt sick again. I thought if I eat it I will vomit immidiatetly on the seat and people beside me. "sleep, sleep```" i repeated the word again and again in my mind. There were fourty minutes left until the plane-ride is over.
Time is a little devil. 【What do you mean?】 When i was bearing this terrible sickness, it is gotten better. I was waiting, shaking and going crazy. After Fourty minutes had passed by, I got off the flight, and I felt so much better.
The first gift that I received in Canada is a clear brain. I walked through the roads. looking at the trees, in which dacing with the wind along with the the singing of birds. I know i am going to fall in love with this country.
As a result [find a better word for that], I am here writing this letter in Notth Delta Secondary school. I would not forget that horrible experience on the airplane.
Hope you have a good time in SFU. I am waiting for you to return soon.
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热心网友
时间：2024-12-05 01:29
热心网友
时间：2024-12-05 01:29
