看一下下面这段话有没有语法错误
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热心网友
时间:2023-10-06 03:31
有些错误,不过大致上已经很好啦!
Hello, everybody! Welcome to the handsomest man's TV show. This is my first programme and today's keyword is, sports!
Now, everybody knows that sports is a very important part of our life. But what is the best way to exercise? Mr. Handsome has the answer!
First of all, lots of people thinks that the best time to exercise is in the morning, around half past five to eight o'clock. But NOT any sooner! Especially, ring the autumn and winter times. Cold weather can cause diseases and colds(感冒).
Secondly, do not exercise after breakfast. This is because after eating, blood supplies are directed to the stomach to help digestion. So, if you exercise after eating, the disruption to the blood flow would affect digestion. Of course, drinking some water would not matter.
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热心网友
时间:2023-10-06 03:32
firstly, a lot of people think that the best time to exercises_s去掉.下一句改成from 5;30 go8:00.
If the weather isn't warm, is apt to cause disease.改成 If the weather isn't warm,is apt will cause disease.最后一句改成drinking some water isn't matter.
热心网友
时间:2023-10-06 03:32
很多错误!
1. Everybody knows that sports plays a very important part in our life;
热心网友
时间:2023-10-06 03:33
exercise(exercises) not(Not) it(the weather) disperse(dispersed)括号里为错的