请看这段英文翻译有没有语法错误,中文意思如下。

发布网友发布时间：2022-08-01 10:07

共5个回答

热心网友时间：2024-11-07 07:53

I am excited to receive your conditional offer of admission. I note that as indicated in the offer, I am required to provide the test results as proof of my language skills by June 1, 2015. I am writing this letter to request for a late submission of the test result, as I have just taken another test and the result will be issued until the end of June.
XXX University is my dream school and my only choice for post-secondary ecation. As I have not submitted my application to other colleges. Therefore, I really cherish this opportunity to be admitted to XXX University.
Hopefully my request for a late submission of the required document can be granted.
Yours faithfully,

译者寄语：
写这一类的请求信，应采用标准的公函格式。故此，应先表明你的要求和理由。须知你的个人对大学的热忱不是充份的理由。假若你有别的理由，请自行修改。

热心网友时间：2024-11-07 07:53

I am very excited to receive my conditional offer. Your university is my dream school, and you are the only one to which I submitted my application. I really appreciate you give me this opportunity, but I have little worry about that I did not submit my language scores before the deadine time(1st of June). I wonder whether it is acceptable to submit in late June?
英文逗号和句号很重要，一句话结束一定要标句号；另外使用从句要注意代名词使用方式。

热心网友时间：2024-11-07 07:54

楼上的改的不错，你自己把意思都写反了，I have little worry about which这个地方，你这意思是你不怎么担心。。

热心网友时间：2024-11-07 07:54

It is my pleasure to receive the conditional offer, XXX university is my top and only choice (I have only applied XXX university), so I would cherish this precious opportunity, However, I have a little concern about handing in the language score on time (as I have see the requirement saying handing it by 1st of June), so I would like to ask is it possible for me to submit the score later (like later in June)?
Thank you!

热心网友时间：2024-11-07 07:55

有些地方不好，改了一下。

I am excited to receive your conditional offer.And I see one of the requirements for admission is to submit language scores before 1st,June.XXX（学校名） University is my dream school and you are the only one to which I submitted my application, so I am really appreciated and will cherish this opportunity,but what I am worrying is that I may not be able to submit language scores in time e to some reasons.So I wonder whether it is possible to submit it later,like in late June?