帮我做中学英文作文,谢谢
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发布时间：2022-07-29 15:32
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热心网友
时间：2023-12-17 02:51
"I am troubled with a dream that keep going in my mind......"
was吧?....
而且,主旨不够明确...还是没打完的原因?...
你要写关于"THE LAST HOURS IN MY LIFE"?那么你在最后写"(of course I dont believe her,this is only a dream) ",也就是说你不相信,那么你还怎么接着往写呢?如果不是写珍惜生命或时间的话题,就不该转到这上来
前面想详细的描写梦,只是反复用的词稍微多了些,句子本人认为可以更精简些.重点是后面对这个梦的感悟.
至于逻辑方面,是有那么一点儿别扭吧.试想,一个人,被告知生命只剩下一天,他会在床上不想起?然后继续想他那个梦?还是去辨别它的真实性?显然这样写是不太符合立意的吧...
看的出很想用短语,定语宾语,从句去写,但先得生硬些
以上全为本人个人意见~~~
*敢问作者可否是中学生?...本人高中,所以技术含量不高,见谅
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热心网友
时间：2023-12-17 02:52
the sunshine in the morning was dazzling,I lied on bed unwilling to get up.I am puzzled by a dream that keeps disturbing my mind...I saw a woman dressed in white whose face was rather pale, and her skin was so pure white that it cannot be a human's. Still, it is only a vivid dream. The woman in white opened her mouth and she started to talk. She was talking until the roof of the world dropped, I couldn't probably understand what she was talking about(it seemed that the dream was a little bit weird). Not until she finished her last word,did I FINALLY got it.She was trying to tell me that I would be killed in 24 hours,so I would only have 24 hours to do what I wanted(of course I don't believe her,this is only a dream)
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热心网友
时间：2023-12-17 02:52
你只有二十四小时了 还做梦 还不如写写你做了什么有意义的事
