请教:这篇英语作文有什么错误?

发布网友发布时间：2022-10-18 07:55

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热心网友时间：2023-11-10 05:10

首先，理解有误。你要讲清楚45%的同学认为不可能，接着讲原因。如：45% of my classmates think it is impossible for them to be friends because parents are too busy to take care of their children.英语是逻辑性很强的语言，所以父母太忙没时间关心孩子最好看出是因果关系，不能一味的用and来连接。
还有，However,55% of my classmates suppose that parents and children friendly at home.这句话that后面接的从句的动词也没有啊，这是语法错误。要求不是有“交谈”一词吗，既然出现了就不要省略，用“talk、chat或communicate”都可以啊
最后一点，题目要求你给出的观点是什么，你只要说parents can be friend 或 parents can't be friend就好了，因为说过头了，你的观点反而不明确了，像这种阐述观点的句子，越简单越直接越好。还有，very want你自己生造的吧，就说want ...very much 就好了

热心网友时间：2023-11-10 05:10

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热心网友时间：2023-11-10 05:11

理解有误。45%的同学认为不可能，接着讲原因.45% of my classmates think it is impossible for them to be friends because parents are too busy to take care of their children.英语是逻辑性很强的语言，所以父母太忙没时间关心孩子最好看出是因果关系，不能一味的用and来连接。

热心网友时间：2023-11-10 05:11

I recently surveyed my classmates about their views on whether parents can be their friends. Forty-five percent of my classmates think that their parents have so much work to do and have no time to care about them.So, there's a gap so that parents and children cant be friends.
HOwever, fifty-five percent of my classmates consider that parents and children can be good friends because their parents often have friendly talk with their children at home.
In my opinion, it's easy to be good friends with parents. After all, all parents love thier children.They really want to understand us.
45要写出来；
it's a gap那句意思不对；
suppose用法错误；
because不能单独成句；
friendly不是副词不可修饰句子；
very want是不存在的；
而且两句句子不能用and连接。

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