请问这句话有语法问题嘛..?

发布网友发布时间：2022-10-17 22:56

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热心网友时间：2023-11-04 08:05

I have worked for you for many years and I still would like work for you but I am too old for that .Please be nice to the old,and remember what good jobs they ever did as well, when they were young.

最大的问题，but 用的不对。这里要么用and. 要么用because + 原因上去remember.

其他地方还好，就是有点绕。感觉说不清的地方，就分2句说。长句不一定是好。

热心网友时间：2023-11-04 08:06

I have been working for you for...

别的正确

热心网友时间：2023-11-04 08:06

第一行的would 要改成will

热心网友时间：2023-11-04 08:07

我觉得没问题！这篇文章是以整体过去时写的，一楼 2楼的说的好像不对吧?

热心网友时间：2023-11-04 08:07

I have worked for you for many years and I would still work for you if I am not too old. Do not be unkind to the old but remember their contributions when they were young.