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热心网友 时间：2022-07-08 17:34

As I grow up，I m (不要also)fascinated with story telling.I realize that illustration is(a在这里) kind of （a这个不要） language which is unique and full of possible。
At the very beginning, （不要the）Japanese comic and animation (lead me to draw这里有点纠结..不明白什么意思)made me felt an irresistible impulse to start drawing.
(句首不用and)After I graated from （Junior省略） Middle School，I entered a Arts school to ecated in fine arts for 4 years。
In （the不要） 2006, I came to London, （and不要） I learn（d时态） a lot from other classmates/schoolmates（students） and the local artists. My experience (made换成changed) (不要the)my style of illustration variable.
下面直接改了：
Through the years of studying fine arts, I learnt a lot drawing skill and specialise in drawing people and expression,I have a clear knowing of the structure of human body.I am adept in catching motion lively,so that I always bring my sketch book when I go for a walk to practise my drawing skill everyday and keep practising drawing skill.

Beside hand-drawing, I am interested on computer graphic (CG)as well. I spent much of my spare time to study CG,thus, I am skilled in the use of Wacom tablet drawing directly on Photoshop and Corel Painter.

In a word，I am the one who have passion on illustration, and I know I have the potential waiting for empolder, Also, is a happiness that can make a living with something I love to do.(最后这句无法理解。。)

热心网友 时间：2022-07-08 17:34

I start to realize that illustration is like a type of language which is unique and full of possibility.

later I will help you correct all of mistakes.
take easy..

热心网友 时间：2022-07-08 17:35

1、“I'm also fascinated with story telling” 我觉得用also有些多余，建议去掉，对原文没什么影响。
2、如果想译为“我开始意识到……”，应该是“I begin to realize……”
3、kind of a language应改为a kind of language
4、lead建议用过去式，与后面对应
5、“ I entered a Arts school to ecated in fine arts for 4 years”
起先to后面跟过去式就错了，其次在句意上有些偏差，我建议改为 “I entered a Arts school to accept four-year ecation of fine arts”
6、 In the 2006？？好象没这种说法，普遍是“In 2006”啊
7、“and I learn……”
介于前面的时态，应该改为“and I learned……”
8、“Through years' studied fine arts”有点问题，建议改为“Through years' studies in fine arts”
9、“……and good at catching motion lively.”
be good at不可分，motion lively需要倒一下。
“……and be good at catching lively motion .”
10、“I keep import my drawing skill”
→ “I keep importing my drawing skill”
11、 “I spent much of my spare time study CG”
前后都为现在时，因此spent改为spend。另外spend+time后跟doing sth，因此study改为studying。
12、“I know I have the potential waiting for empolder”
①the可去掉 ②感觉怪怪的
我改后是这样的“I know I have potential can be empoldered”
13、happiness是不可数名词，前面不能加a
最后一句改为“Also,it is happiness that I can make a living doing something I love。”

我查了很多资料，应该错不多了。你自己再看看吧！从上到下念一遍，这样很容易知道顺不顺，有没有语法错误了。

热心网友 时间：2022-07-08 17:35

As I grow up，I have become fascinated with story telling. I realize that illustration is a language which is unique and full of possibilities.

At the very beginning Japanese comic and animation lead me to drawing. After I graated from Junior Middle School, I entered an art school to become ecated in fine arts for four years. In 2006, I came to London and learn lots from other students and local artists. My experience broaden my illustration style.

Through years of studied fine arts, I have acquired many good drawing skills. I specialized in human facial illustration and capture their utmost life-touching expression. My clear knowledge of the structure of human body enables me to at catch live motion vividly. I always bring my sketch book with me when I go out and practice my drawing skill everyday. I love to keeping improve my drawing skill.

Beside hand-drawing, I am interested in computer graphics(CG) as well. I spent much of my spare time study CG,thus I am skilled in the use of Wacom tablet drawing directly into Photoshop and Corel Painter.

In a word，I am the one who has passion for illustration, and I know I have the potential many employers have been looking for.
To make a living with my love in illustration is a dream come true to me.

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以后要防止用 "a lot" 改为用 "lots", "much" 或 "many"
试着少用点 "I" 不然对方会认为你是太“自我”了。

热心网友 时间：2022-07-08 17:36

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热心网友 时间：2022-07-08 17:37

As I grow up，I m (不要also)fascinated with story telling.I realize that illustration is(a在这里) kind of （a这个不要） language which is unique and full of possible。
At the very beginning, （不要the）Japanese comic and animation (lead me to draw这里有点纠结..不明白什么意思)made me felt an irresistible impulse to start drawing.
(句首不用and)After I graated from （Junior省略） Middle School，I entered a Arts school to ecated in fine arts for 4 years。
In （the不要） 2006, I came to London, （and不要） I learn（d时态） a lot from other classmates/schoolmates（students） and the local artists. My experience (made换成changed) (不要the)my style of illustration variable.
下面直接改了：
Through the years of studying fine arts, I learnt a lot drawing skill and specialise in drawing people and expression,I have a clear knowing of the structure of human body.I am adept in catching motion lively,so that I always bring my sketch book when I go for a walk to practise my drawing skill everyday and keep practising drawing skill.

Beside hand-drawing, I am interested on computer graphic (CG)as well. I spent much of my spare time to study CG,thus, I am skilled in the use of Wacom tablet drawing directly on Photoshop and Corel Painter.

In a word，I am the one who have passion on illustration, and I know I have the potential waiting for empolder, Also, is a happiness that can make a living with something I love to do.(