你们学校最近就“一个好朋友的标准”做了一次问卷调查，调结果如下图。请你以“What a good friend shoul

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What a good friend should be like
Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like. About seven percent/ only a few/ Less than ten percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome. About forty-eight percent/ Less than half/ Nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons. Sixty-seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing, and also they should be good at sports. Ninety-five percent/ Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively, kind and helpful but also honest. Good friends should trust each other and share joys. I think to be honest is the most important for us all.
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Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like. Nearly all (95%) of the students think a good friend should be kind, helpful and honest. He or she should trust you and be willing to share joys with you. Sixty-seven percent of the students would like their friends to be fond of singing and dancing. Besides, they hope their friends are good at sports. Forty-eight percent of the students agree that a good friend must be hard-working and do well in lessons. Of course, there are some (7% / less than 10%) caring about appearance. They prefer to choose those with beautiful faces and slim figures as their good friends.
I don’t think a good friend has to be beautiful or handsome. I think honesty is the most important.

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要是写出人们心目中好朋友的标准，因此一般现在时和含情态动词的句子使用比较多，，所以在写作时，要注意时态的变化。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。
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【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: be fond of；share joys with you；Ninety-five percent/ Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively, kind and helpful but also honest. I don’t think a good friend has to be beautiful or handsome. I think honesty is the most important.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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