请根据以下任务说明和写作要求,写一篇幅150词左右的英文短文。 Self – discipline （自律） An elderly

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When a carpenter was building the last house before retiring, he was absent-minded and did not take it seriously. But finally his employer gave the house to him, which made him regretful.
I firmly believe that self-discipline matters a lot for success. As the saying goes, the first and best victory is to conquer the self. Life is a continuous process of fighting and one can not achieve success without self-discipline.
I once took part in a summer camp. At the end of the camp, everyone was so tired that they left the camp with lots of rubbish. However, I stayed behind to help the trainers clean the rubbish. To my great surprise, I was told that cleaning the rubbish was the last test of the camp, so I was the only one who was announced qualified.
The experience makes a big difference to my studies and life. I think self-discipline is an important factor in my learning English well. Therefore, do not let a lack of self-discipline be an obstacle to your success.

试题分析：这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括本文的故事，再以约120个词写一篇短文，内容包括：（1）你读短文后的感想；（2）叙述你的一次真实或虚构的对某一件事高度自律或负责的经历；（3）那次高度自律或负责的经历对你的影响。这道题目要求比较严格，所以在写作之前一定要看清题目。题目还要求你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
点评：本文属于根据原文内容写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。