英语作文求批改~

发布网友发布时间：2022-04-23 18:59

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热心网友时间：2023-07-06 21:35

Generally,majority of people thought that it was better to find a tutor rather than ask their friends for help. However,that could lead them to some disadvantages.
(改为majority of people更适合大多数。
to find a tutor,前面加it was better...rather than...。
ask sb. for help。）

If you find a tutor to help you pass an examination, It will be possible to cost a lot. Learning with friends can not only cost us nothing, but also improve our friendship ring the learning process.
(if.......it will.....句型。
be possible to do....。
not only...but also...不但。。而且。。句型）

First ,If you ask you friends for help ,sometime you can save a great deal of money and you can use the money to do whatever you prefer when you pass the examination.

(can 后面直接加动词原形。
you can use the money to do whatever you prefer....在英语上这更容易理解，不然为什么省了钱，考试后就可以做自己想做的了。。）

For instance, two years ago,my little sister had an exam about painting, and actually My major was art. Since I was capable of painting picture all the time, and everyone knew arts tutor was really expensive, my destiny was coming. Finally, my little sister not only saved a lot of money but also passed the exam with high scores. This is my story of killing two birds with one stone.
(没有after two years ago的，因为没有说”在两年前之后“
要不after two years, 要不two years ago.
记住全篇要保持过去式一致。
还有，of doing something...）

Second, it's convenient to ask your friends for help. Sometimes your tutor may be busy doing other things, so if you have any question you can just go straight to ask your friend to help you solve the problem.

In conclusion,My advice is that if you need help with studying for an exam,It's better to find a friend who has good understanding about the specific subject rather than finding a tutor to help you.

( be convenient to do something...句型。
sometimes,always, 一句中不可以重复用多个这种表时间的词。
我把你把一些比较复杂的改成容易理解的了。

热心网友时间：2023-07-06 21:35

Generally, a multitude of people think that they prefer to find a tutor instead of asking their friends for help when they meet problems.However,that way has a variety of disadvantages.If you find a tutor to help you pass an examination,it will posibly cost you a great amount of money.No matter how cheap it is to ask a tutor for help,if we ask our friends for help,we can strengthen our friendship ring the learniing process at the same time.
First of all,if you choose to ask your friends for hellp,sometimes you can save a great deal of moeny.Also,you can do want you want to do after you have passed the examination.Here is one of my experience,two years ago,my younger sister had an indispensable painting exam, and fortunately,I major in art either.Therefore,I am able to paint picture all the time.Everyone knows that arts tutor is really rexpensive,so my chance came.Eventrually,my younger sister not only saved a lot of money but also passed the exam with high scores.Anyway,this thing can be decribed by a Chinese proverb that is kill two birds with one stone.
On the other hand,it's more convenient for you to ask your friends for help,sometimes your tutor will be reached,so if you have puzzles,just get out of the bed and find your friends for help,your friends will solve problem for you at anytime.
In conclusion, my advice is that if you need help for passing an exam,it's better to find a friend who is knowledgeable on the exam subject rather than dinding a tutor for help.

热心网友时间：2023-07-06 21:36

错误1.exciting应为excited
2.know后最好加个about
3.isn't
it应为don't
you
4.擅长弹钢琴那句应该是playing
没处错误扣一分，加分亮点没有，整体水平偏下，扣一分，书写工整，卷面分加一分。6分，勉强及格。