英语作文修改(怎么改如下)

发布网友发布时间：2022-04-29 20:42

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热心网友时间：2022-06-22 12:23

I want to read a book ring the winter holiday because books are very important to us. I usually read 【改成enjoy】a book in my spare time. For example【可以改为for instance，同样的意思，明显这个词汇更高级】, when I have nothing to do, I will read【改为appreciate，有欣赏的意思】 it.
{ I also read a book before I go to bed， which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.}这整句话前面那句是在不咋的，和你后面所用的词汇完全不是一个档次的，话说你几年级，后面的词汇到高中（turn out to be adj.)才会教。所以我决定全部改掉。。As a result of it,I broaden my horizon.What's more,I gain various knowledge.At the same time,I improve my reading ability in a short time.

热心网友时间：2022-06-22 12:23

Something I plan to do ring the winter holiday. I want to read a book ring the winter holiday because reading are very important to us. I usually do some readings in my spare time. For example, when I am free, I will read newspapers. I often read books before I go to bed, which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.

热心网友时间：2022-06-22 12:24

for example ,I read a book when I finish my homework.

最后加一句I like reading books .this winter holiday I will read many books.

热心网友时间：2022-06-22 12:24

总体没有错句。不过我觉得第一句感觉不顺口，建议换种表达