如何让英语作文靓起来

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一、

状语提前

所谓状语提前就是把副词、
介词、
现在分词或者动词不定式组成的小语段放在句首，
对前置
部分起到强调作用，
而使用这种语法最大的好处是让你的句子有一个长短相合的节奏感。
每
篇文章中出现两、三处这样的亮点，会让阅卷老师感到心旷神怡，是一种很拿分的策略。

1.

副词及短语作状语，常用的词有
fortunately/unfortunately,
personally,
perhaps,
instead,
similarly, overall, in particular
等。

◆

They will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger
instead
.
→

Instead
, they will probably go to a nursery school when they are much younger.
◆
I
personally
think that the amount of

money such sports stars make is more justified than the
huge earnings of stars.
→
Personally
, I think that the amount of

money such sports stars make is more justified than the
huge earnings of stars.
◆

I want to
in particular
sell my big dining table.
→
In particular
I want to sell my big dinning table.
2.
介词及介词短语作状语，

常用的词和短语有
besides, in addiction to , apart from, in terms
of , despite , as a result of, in spite of
等

◆
The largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes
throughout the country
.
→

Throughout the country
, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes.
3.
现在分词短语作状语，

这里有一个额外提醒，

即一定要保持句子的主语和分词逻辑主
语的一致性。

◆
I
bear
in
mind
the
circumstances

and
trust
you
will
kindly
waive
any
fines
that
may
have
accumulated.
→
Bear
in
mind
the
circumstances
,
I
trust
you
will
kindly
waive
any
fines
that
may
have
accumulated.
4.
动词不定式作状语，表目的。

◆
The government should encourage people to avoid going out at rush hour
to alleviate traffic
jams.
→
To alleviate traffic jams,
the government should encourage people to avoid going out at rush
hour
二、插入语

插入语是一种独立成分，
一般与句中的其他成分没有语法上的关系，
大多是对一句话进
行的附加说明或解释，常由一个词、
一个短语或一个句子构成，常置于句中或句末，一般用
逗号与句子隔开。
插入语是一种地道的英语表达方式，
可以让单调的句子富于变化，
而且更
有跳跃性，活泼却不失严谨。

◆
There is ,
however,
another possible way of defining that part of the quotation.
1.
凡是表示个人观点或态度的时候，都可以用介词短语，不定式以及主谓结构作插入成分。

◆
Of crucial importance, in my opinion, is how we define
“
responsible for bringing the children
up
”
.
◆
Well, I just got so fed up with it
–
I was working really long hours and, to be honest, the pay
wasn
’
t great.

◆
He
’
ll
work
only
ring
daytime
hours,
so
you
won
’
t
be
disturbed
in
the
evening
again,
I
promise.