谁能帮我纠正一下错误?(英语作文)

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热心网友时间：2023-10-06 04:45

什么是最重要的事在我们的生活中？我认为它是幸福。当然，我们的生活也许是乏味和单调的，但是我们应该发现使我们愉快在我们的生活中的意味深长的事和事。可能某些人民为什么说，我是否不会有任何愉快的事，是世界很不合理的？但是我们应该知道，幸福实际上是一件简单的事。如果我们想要它，我们将发现它。它在到处。记住，幸福包括incontentment。一个人为什么总是让烦恼？可能，因为他经常不满意。因此喜欢是满意的，幸福将来您。
(这是你的文章返程中文的文章，自己检查一下吧! o(∩_∩)o...）

热心网友时间：2023-10-06 04:45

What is the most important thing in our life? I think it is the happiness.
Of course, our life may be boring and monotonous,but we should find meaningful things and things what(不要用who) make us happy in our life. Maybe someone (因为后边主语是i单数)will say, I never have any happy things and (连接上两个句子，要不句意有点脱臼)why the world is so unfair （语序不对）? But we should know, happiness actually is a simple thing. If we want it, we will find it. It is just in everywhere.Remembering（该用非谓语形式）, happiness consists incontentment. Why is one person always upset?The reason is (同一个句子中why和because不可连用)he is often dissatisfied. So please make yourself （缺点） be satisfied, happiness will come around of （介词短语）you.

热心网友时间：2023-10-06 04:46

What is the most important thing in our life? In my opinion, that is happiness. Of course, our life may be boring and monotonous, but we should find meaningful things which make us happy. Maybe someone will say that, I never have any joyful things, why the world is so unfair? But we should know, actually happiness is a simple thing. Once we want it, we will find it. It is everywhere. Just remember, happiness consists of satisfactoriness. Why does someone easily get upset? Maybe it is because he is often dissatisfied. So please be satisfied, happiness will come around you.

热心网友时间：2023-10-06 04:46

What is the most important thing in our life? I think it is happiness. but we should find something meaningful what make us happy in our life. I never have any happy things, why is the world so unfair? But we should know, happiness actually is a simple thing. If we want it, we will find it. It is just everywhere.Remember, happiness consists uncontaminated. Why is one person always upset? Because he is often dissatisfied .So please to be satisfied, happiness will come around you.

热心网友时间：2023-10-06 04:47

and things who make us happy in our life

who 改成 what

I never have any happy things

any 改成 some (不是很确定)

why is the world so unfair

改成 why the world is so unfair

happiness consists incontentment 这句不懂啥意思...
incontentment 毋庸置疑的

Why is one person always upset

is 改成 does

happiness will come around you

around 改成 to

热心网友时间：2023-10-06 04:45

热心网友时间：2023-10-06 04:46

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热心网友时间：2023-10-28 05:43

热心网友时间：2023-10-28 05:44

热心网友时间：2023-10-28 05:45