英语短文纠错，看一下有没有什么表达不地道或语法错误，帮我改一下，理由要详细有
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发布时间：2022-05-16 17:30
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热心网友
时间：2023-11-06 05:59
1.我不知道这篇文章用在什么地方，但是我觉得第一句话完全可以不要。
2.Maybe you will say heart or something else, but the correct answer is shoulder。 这里最好这样写Maybe your answer is the heart or something else, but the correct answer，in my eyes, is the shoulder.
3.A wide shoulder which your friends or relatives can cry on .
这里并不是一句完整的话。which引导了一个修饰肩膀的定语从句。用强调句你觉得呢？It is a wide shoulder that your friends or relatives can cry on .
4.David’s mother, a kind housewife, one day, she asked her son what the most important body part was in his mind. 这里的she使得句子无端多了一个主语，所以不要she才是正确的。然后把one day放在her son后面。
5.Her son said heart at once, she smiled and said nothing. 最好把said换成answered\replied，然后在she之前加一个连接词and 或 then.
6.Suddenly she asked her son the special question, David was shocked, and confused. He didn’t know why his mother asked this question again and again. He summoned the courage to ask her mother and knew the answer… 这里的表述有点混乱。你再多读几遍就会明白。
7.The most important part is the shoulder,and sometimes everyone needs a shoulder to cry 。用一般现在时就可以了
8. his mother hoped her son would have enough love and shoulders when he needed… 足够的肩膀？？？ hoped 后面不能省that
9.sympathetic是形容词，后面得接点什么
热心网友
时间：2023-11-06 05:59
Suddenly she asked her son the special question不用specisl而用just 或者right很地道的
everyone needs[这里是用needed全文都是过去时态] a shoulder to cry sometimes,cry后面要加介词on,才完整,因为修饰的中心词是前面的shoulder
最后一句很亮,但是sympathetic 是adj,应该用n.(sympathy ).
加油!!
热心网友
时间：2023-11-06 06:00
May I ask you a question? What is the most important body part in your mind？
Maybe you will say the heart or something else, but the correct answer is the shoulder.
A wide shoulder which your friends or relatives can cry on .when they are sad or disappointed, you will give the shoulder that they need…
David’s mother, a kind housewife, one day, she asked her son what the most important body part was in his mind. Her son said heart at once, she smiled and said nothing.
Over the years, she asked her son a couple more times, however, each time she said the same answer，“you are wrong, but you are getting smarter.”
When David’s grandpa died, the entire family member cried, also, tears welled in the eyes of David’s mother. Suddenly she asked her son the special question, David was shocked, and confused. He didn’t know why his mother asked this question again and again. He summoned the courage to ask her mother and knew the answer…
The most important part was shoulder, everyone needs a shoulder to cry sometimes, his mother hoped her son would have enough love and shoulders when he needed…
The most important body part is not a selfish one, it is sympathetic to the pain of others…
热心网友
时间：2023-11-06 06:00
较适用。
The most important part was shoulder, everyone needs用needs较好，因为只大多数情况。
热心网友
时间：2023-11-06 06:01
what the most important * that the most important
everyone needs[这里是用needed呢，还是用needs呢]* need
